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It was Your Destiny -PILOT-

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It was Your Destiny -PILOT-

Post by Bibarel on Sat Jun 20, 2009 9:40 pm

It was Just a normal day.I was just a normal Kid.In a normal Life. Having A normal Day ...But things where about to get interesting.

~~~ ChApTeR 1

My name Is Paul Kalowiy.Im just a normal Student Attended West Brookes High.Everything was going like it did everyday School Homework Chores Sleep Was my basic schedule.Until One day things got a little interesting.I never thought that i would be a Villian in so many peoples eyes after this when i was helping the people i loved.

MORNING CURRENT TIME APPROXIMATELY 6:00 AM

"Hey mom!" I shouted just leaving my room i was heading down the stairs and was at the door "Im goin to school now!"
"No your not Young Man!"
"But i have to go to school!"I started "I need to learn don't I?"
"I mean your not going to School with out Your Lunch are you?"
"Mom that Power rangers Lunch box is to young for me i'll buy my lunch!"
"Comeon! Just for today!What ever happened to my little boy?"
"I grown Up mom!"I said "Im not your little boy anymore!" I said as i slammed the door and walked to the BusStop
I stood there with A few other students i didnt know then the Bus came and The fellow students and i boarded it i walked to the middle of the Bus and sat down at the empty seat I wasnt Really popular so i sat by myself most of the trip.Then we stopped at the last stop before school and a new girl walked into the Bus She went over and sat next to me and she said "Hi!" In the most serene voice i have ever heard i was silent the rest of the way We where at school and she said "Gee i guess your the silent type huh?" Everyone departed the Bus Exept Me i was always the last one out the bus It gave me a sense of pride being last last being picked on teams getting last laugh etc. I almost always got it.School passed by quicker than usual for me today I had a sense of Rush that it made time appear faster.I walked home after school because i didnt want to ride the Bus i passed by the TV store And saw that Obama had made another crucial mistake "Tsk" i said passing the store. I was at my House And I saw this dude with Semi long hair and apparently and eye patch on "Who are you!?!" I said
"Don't worry I'm One of your moms friends.Something has happened..."
"What do you mean!?!"I was on my toes preparing to try and land a blow at any second
"Her Destiny Has finally caught up with her..."
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Post by Bibarel on Sun Jun 21, 2009 10:33 pm

cHaPtEr 2

"Wait What do you mean her destiny?"I yelled "WHO ARE YOU?!?"
"It's no time to talk about this unlock this door and go in!"
"Fine but if you pull anything...Your Going Down!"I said in a near threatening voice
"Your threats don't scare me.Do what ever you want to me" He retorted
I took out my Keys and put it in the Hole and turned it and opened the door slowly and stepped in to see A broken Window and my Mom on the Floor
"I told you something bad has happened..."
"What did you do!?!"I shouted "How did you know she was dead!?"
I was very panicky
"I did nothing...I felt a disturbance then i came..."He said "I heard something going on inside but i didn't want to interrupt what was happening for it could have been bad or good for her..."
"DIDN'T WANT TO INTERFERE?!YOU DIDN'T WANT TO INTERRUPT!YOU B@ST@RD!"I shouted i thrust my arm in a hook in which he retaliated with side stepping and grabbing and had me in a dragon arm bar.
"She didn't want to Die it was her destiny to die..."He said in a tone which would make your body shut down as if nothing happened it took me a while but i came back to earth.
"Wait!"I took my arm away and said "What do you mean her destiny!?!You could had helped her you know!!!"
"I know but fate told me not to..."He said
"WHAT FATE!?!WHAT DESTINY!?!ALL YOUR TALKING IS BULL$H!T!"I said in a depressed like voice while keeping my tone of voice.
"Fate and destiny is the reason your alive right now..."


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Post by Bibarel on Mon Jun 22, 2009 11:07 pm

"I'm alive only cuz' i want to i have a choice and this is my choice!"I said
"If that is true that meant your mom had a choice to and this is what she chose."
I had nothing to say he twisted my words into a smart remark.
"Tell me now who are you..." i demanded
"My name is Destamo...I am a follower or Destiny."
"Now that i know that tell me why did you really come here?"
"I came to recruit your help in the battle angainst these kind of people

ChApTeR 3 Tommorow =D


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Post by Bibarel on Sat Jun 27, 2009 7:12 pm

"Who?TELL ME WHO!"
"The group of people that planned to murder your mother..."
"Dont say that give me there Name!"
"They are the Onyx Shadows they base there attacks on pokemon moves...And They have created some Transforming weapon that temporaliy transforms you into a pokemon...I have 3 One for you and 2 others but who could these others be?"
"I think i got an idea!"

~~~~~SCHOOL
I was walking to school with thought in my mind who the other two are they are pokemon fanatics so i went to teh Two most fanatics i known The Nerdish Jock Nathan And Ms.Drama Queen Hayley Both liked pokemon and they should know a few skills in battle I told them the layup and they agreed no questions asked I took them back to My apartment and waited for him Destamo All of a sudden he appeared in front of us apearing as a Mismagius He reverted back and said "Ah good choice!"He said looking at Nathan and Hayley. "Time for practice to begin!"He gave all of us differant morphers and we where supposed to be differant pokemon Before i knew it Nathan Was a Machamp and Hayley was a lopunny i pressed random buttons and i was a magikarp... This was going to be a long day


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Post by Mercury on Sun Jun 28, 2009 3:59 am

This story is very confusing =/
And you keep on putting capital letters in the middle of sentences.
I lol'd at the Magikarp part though.
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Post by Bibarel on Sun Jun 28, 2009 10:42 am

well merc the story is first person so if the first person is confused the entire story is about confusing sh!t xD


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Post by rikuru on Wed Jul 15, 2009 1:09 am

nice story :p

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